The Wings Challenge

Okay, you might not know this, but I draw a webcomic (it's currently at http://www.fireball-comics.vze.com if you're interested). I just came up with an idea for a new strip, but it doesn't fit into the current storyline, so it'll most likely appear to the site in March or something. This particular one has got quite a few panels, though, and I thought it might be a fun exercise to see if we can't have some fun with it.

Before I coloured it and added all the text that I want the comic to have, I saved the lineart, more or less - there's a few artifacts that I didn't clean off, but meh. It serves its purpose for this activity.

Some of you might remember the 'With You Always...' thread. This is kinda like it, in that you put speech bubbles or whatever wherever you want, and try and make some sort of story out of the pictures. It's a Make-Your-Own-Comic! And so follows the comic for you to mess with:

[url="http://www.willeth.com"][/url]

Oh, and also, the funniest panel may well make it into my avatar. I've laughed myself silly over people's submissions for these (and not just on this board).

Enjoy.


EDIT: Oh, crap, this belongs in Posting Games, doesn't it. Someone redirect it - but leave a shortcut in O-T, I think it could be popular, and a lot of people don't check anything other than O-T...

My lame attempt.

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v496/AntmanMadness/sketch.jpg[/IMG]

Panel1
Spiky: I'm starving. Curse my lack of money and food!

Panel2
Spiky: The clouds...they look like mashed potatoes! I'd eat them if they weren't so **** high.
Panel3
Curly: You know they aren't actually food, right?
Panel4
We can't let ourselves get carried away by our imaginations. It's just stupid.
Panel5
Curly(thinking):I'm starving. Curse my lack of money and food!
Panel6
Spiky: You're right. I think we shou- hey, are you eating our project? We wrote so much already!
Panel7
Curly: Huh?
Panel8
Idiot. You can't write on a peanut butter and jelly sandwich.


Top of my head. I don't have time to put it into the panels. Maybe in a few hours when i get back.

Ant made me ****ing bol.

I made an attempt at cultism:

it's pants but here goes

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/bazariah/sketchWITHCUSTOMBAZTEXT.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Speedfreak312002/sketch.jpg[/IMG]

I have so won this.

I lol'd for the mere fact that it all came together so well :(

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/end_Fate/Wallpapersetc/sketch.jpg[/IMG]

Whoa, Fate - that third panel is uncannily similar to the one I had.

In order of greatness:

Ant
Speedy
Fate

The rest just sucked. Expect for Klarth's. Which also sucked, but was so bad that I couldn't help but laugh. Oh, and baz's was unreadable.

I liked Dericks too :(


Thanks anyways Judge Vamp.

yeah, mine had infinite wit.

Honestly, I don't get Ant's at all:(

Well maybe I do get it and just don't find it funny :(

I think "sweet fat juice" lost me.

Fate wins for introducing me to the word douchebaggery.

My contribution. Lame, I know.

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/penguinbob/fdsfgs.jpg[/IMG]

I love English and its malleability. Any word can be an adjective or an adverb if hyphenated or suffixed correctly.

Sweet fat juice is a joke in reference to a post made by Darksong X in Angelwings and Darkbulbs joke which was actually me on his account. :)

We like to use that line still to this day. Keep in mind that it was posted about 2 months ago.

Yeah, I laugh every time I see that 'THEREFORE'. And I can't find a fault in Fate's...

My favourite word, akin to 'douchebaggery' is 'asshattery'.

Ants's was funny but I didn't "Get it" tilll the 2nd time I read through it.

Anyway.

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v245/djcat64/Wingscomic.jpg[/IMG]

It fell apart after the fourth panel.

[quote=Ant]Sweet fat juice is a joke in reference to a post made by Darksong X in Angelwings and Darkbulbs joke which was actually me on his account. :)

We like to use that line still to this day. Keep in mind that it was posted about 2 months ago.

So it's an inside joke.

That stops it being genius >:O

Speedy's right.

Though the rest of the comic was funny.

I thought Speedfreaks was funny...

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Speedfreak312002/sketch2.jpg[/IMG]

For 4chan.

I don't really like the 6th panel, though. Any suggestions welcome.

"is this loli?"

Give the man a prize.

yeah ok i'm good :cool:

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v394/aestheticme/fullhouse.gif[/IMG]

And that's how the show gained its popularity. :(

I liked Ant's and Matt's. Adam's second one was also good, as it still made me laugh, even though I've never been to 4chan.

I will seriously do one tommorow, that is just a placeholder. do i also have permission to edit some of the looks of the people?

Wow, I'd completely forgotten about this.

oh god i suck with dates.

[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/9738/sketch5fa.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
i tried, ok?

[quote=007 ninja][URL="http://imageshack.us"][IMG]http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/9738/sketch5fa.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
i tried, ok?

It would have been funny if you made a bunch of "Clue" references.

i made a stupid and poorly placed dante reference
isn't that enough for you women

Heck, it would make a good Sherlock Holmes reference.

My lame and horrible attemp to being funny. ;)

[IMG]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6715/emo9uy.jpg[/IMG]

Amusing, nonetheless.

Holy shid, how many posts did I not notice there? My 'amusing, nonetheless' was to 007 ninja's comic.

[IMG]http://tinypic.com/juy9v5.jpg[/IMG]
Thar ye go.

The last one should say "It was the ***." "Good," says the man off-screen, "cause I was going to say it tastes like it!"