My heart hurts me from within. It aches in sorrow for I am unable to express my undying feeling from on. I tried to just get over this feeling, to look away, but my love for you is too great. I know this might be weird, just finding this, but I cannot speak these words for too much fear swells within me. I am too fearful to speak my heart in person, but it aches too much I must tell you someway. Though we don't talk much except for the occasional word here or there, you likely don't even notice me, but you've taken my heart captive. I can't think anymore about anything without you coming to my mind.
Whenever I see the seen I think how bright just the sight of your face makes everything. Whenever I hear a soothing sound, I can't help but think how your heavenly voice. Whenever I see a flower, I can't help but think how much more beautiful your face is. Whenever I hear you talk my heart grows wings. I can't keep this within any longer, so this is why I'm writing this to you.
If you choose to simply ignore and toss out this letter, I'll understand, just please consider giving me a chance, give us a chance, let me show you my love.
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Sounds a bit desperate. Who is this to?
Moved to Lit/Fanfic.
That's adorable; it's really pretty. :) Good luck with whoever it may be you're sending it to.
Sounds a bit cliche if not imaginative at times.
Yeah--I'll have to agree with Vampiro there. It's a little too cheesy if you don't really know this girl, unless you are on really good terms, I don't recommend you do anything like this.
sounds more like something a band would take up as a love song I feel.
Oh, by the way, it's scene not seen [/pedant man]
I think a love letter is slightly more romantic than "WATCHER RIP GIRL FROM SEAT. WATCHER CARRY GIRL TO LOVE ROOM, THERE SAUCY THINGS HAPPEN WITH WATCHER AND GIRL." Besides, looking too confident and assertive just makes you look arrogant - I think that such a heartfelt and sincere expression of deep emotion is far more healthy.
I don't think that's how Admiral meant it. If one can say something like the letter, but without the desperate sounding bits, and removing some of the clich
I'd assume the letter wouldn't be anonymous. Besides, I think most people would lose track of their words while speaking, and make a fool of their self - you can proof read a letter.
Just buy a lamb's heart and dump it into his/her locker, solves all love problems!
Of course, Admiral Anthrax, that's not to say that if that kina thing works for you I'd be against it, just that I'm really not at all a fan of that kinda approach, personally. I guess you can go about it any way you want, whatever suits you (lamb heart aside). The "GROW SOME BALLS" concept seems slightly flawed to me, I really don't think it should be applied to such situations. But to you, it may seem perfect; it's a matter of style.
I dunno, the general meaning says "I want you now so I'm writing a very desperate letter". I'm not saying that you're a bad person- maybe you just need to make it sound a bit less... stalker/fanboy-ish.
Recommendation: Forget the Linkin-Park inspired whiny letter. Letters only really come when you actually go out with someone; the clich
I made something like this. But i made it into a car. And used my knowledge of romeo and juliet(yes, i know that play/book) It was kool.
I agree with Vampiro. You will most probably freak her out and she won't talk to you. You should build up a relationship by having casual conversation or maybe by being cocky and funny. A sense of humor is a great asset to your success. and that letter just made me yawn. If you only know her from class... then find a way to get to sit next to her. Talk to her then.
Reading that thing made me want to post this:
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