Opinions on some music I'm working on




Posted by Draxamus

I've been working on some songs lately. I play them on my keyboard, no multiple tracks or anything, just straight playing. I recorded a few mp3s of my unfinished songs. They're not the best recordings, because I was just using the microphone on my webcam. Also the timing is a bit off, and I make a few errors in them, but it's frustrating to try and get a recording PERFECT, no what I mean. But enough justification. I ask that you listen to all the mp3s fully if you want to voice an opinion. Also remember they're unfinished, so they stop abruptly.

This first one is a song using the regular Grand Piano voice on my keyboard.

http://www.vgchat.com/~newtimes/messin.mp3

This next one is a darker song using the Organ voice.

http://www.vgchat.com/~newtimes/dark2.mp3

And this is a part I'm going to add somewhere in the organ song, that I came up with the other. I like this one a lot.

http://www.vgchat.com/~newtimes/newnewdark.mp3

The songs may be subject to some change, of course. Such is the case with messin.mp3. In the third part of the song I've added some variations that aren't in the mp3 itself.




Posted by coromoro

I found the first one a bit too repetitive, but the others were all right. :cool:




Posted by Draxamus

Did you think the whole song repeated itself too much? The first part is a big drug out, but then it has three other parts.