My video game stories

Hi.I'm Jackwriter and I am going to become a game designer after my graduation.I am not a programmer so I can't really make games but rather concepts instead.This is my first game Idea with the story.Hope you like it.

D.N
Gameplay:It is a beat

cool story bro

VGChat is the perfect place for this. You are going to be so famous.

If you're allergic to sarcasm, I apologize to your next of kin.

I mean you would have died from the sarcasm if you were allergic to it, thus disallowing me to apologize to you, personally. No harm done.

You might want to get copyrights on your stories/game designs before you start pasting them all over the internets, though. We're all fine upstanding members of society here on VGChat (there goes that sarcasm again, darnit!), but other denizens of the electronic hive of scum and villainy might not be so accomodating.

[QUOTE=JackWriter;953706]Hi.I'm Jackwriter and I am going to become a game designer after my graduation.I am not a programmer so I can't really make games but rather concepts instead.This is my first game Idea with the story.Hope you like it.

Oh, cool! So, who's going to program your idea?

I have no Idea where I can find a programmer now.Just tell me how the gameplay and the plot is.That will help me a lot.And Thank you for understanding me.

don

After 2 years from now.

Listen if you too got ideas,you can send them here so that everyone can help each other.

wow that was awesom

i dont think they really have enough super powers though, like can max fueujack turn into a dragon or some **** thatd be really cool

if you want more of my ideas just tell me

Gun Hunter
Episode 1:Vanderik

i want to be a genius

I would listen to Big Boss. He went to Full Sail college, a renowned game design school, and is well into the gaming industry right now (As far as I know). Correct me if I'm wrong, but if you REALLY don't want to program, AT ALL, wouldn't you have to have a set of skills that is extremely useful? Like he said, ideas are a dime a dozen, and unless you have a way to prove yourself useful, there's no point in even having them. I was under the impression that, if you're not going to be a programmer, you'd have to be someone strong on the artistic side, such as an artist, animator/renderer, art director, whatever. Am I wrong in assuming that someone strong on the side of art and design (assuming they do know a ****-ton about the technical side of that) could work their way up to a position such as an art director, and with those skills, eventually work up to lead designer? I'm not sure about all of this, so I'd love to be informed.

Also, Big Boss, I don't mean to be a pest, but what are some of these books? Any you recommend in particular? You've caught my interest. Cause I truly am intending to go into the industry. =| I'm just looking for a college right now. I'd like to get a head start on whatever I can.

And Jackwriter, what makes you "not capable" or programming? Surely you're at least capable of it if you try. And why on earth would your concepts take a hit if you're spending your time in code. Are you under the impression that they just hire people to sit in a room and devote all their time to thinking up concepts while a bunch of programming slaves make them happen? I have a ton of concepts, and I don't think spending more time in front of a computer screen is suddenly going to make them worse. They would probably just change, for better or for worse, as you find out how the technology limits your ideas, and how you'd have to bend your ideas to wrap around that.

Look I understand your point but if at all I do programming my creativity will get absorbed because I will only be spending time on codes rather than the concepts.There are lots of game designers out there who don't know programming but rather design the characters,concepts,gameplay and plot which I'm going to do.I even have proof just read this article from wikipedia.

As games became more complex and computers and consoles became more powerful (allowing more features), the job of the game designer became a separate job function, with the lead programmer splitting his time between the two functions, moving from one role to the other. Later, game complexity escalated to the point where it required someone who concentrated solely on game design. Many early veterans chose the game design path eschewing programming and delegating those tasks to others.
Today, it is rare to find a video or computer game where the principal programmer is also the principal designer, except in the case of casual games, such as Tetris or Bejeweled. With very complex games, such as MMORPGs, or a big budget action or sports title, designers may number in the dozens. In these cases, there are generally one or two principal designers and many junior designers who specify subsets or subsystems of the game. In larger companies like Electronic Arts, each aspect of the game (control, level design or vehicles) may have a separate producer, lead designer and several general designers.

Now just tell me if you like both of my stories please?

Look big boss,don't be like my bro okay?You may have a point of being a programmer but I don't want to do programming.Now let me give you an example of what I meant.In some video game credits(like super smash bros Melee,Pokemon Diamond) why are programmer and game designing staffs separate instead of combining them together and call it the game designing staff instead?Maybe I should have said that I am gonna be a game artist/storywriter/character designer instead.DOES THAT NEED ANY OF PROGRAMMING?!? look big boss maybe you might have got the information wrong and like you said maybe we all should find out what the correct meaning of game designing really is.If games are expensive and if they say that you need programming the only thing I can say is this.....An Idea is the most valuable thing and if the idea is disturbed by programming it would become worse.I'll give you an example if you have seen the game Sonic 06(The one with ps3 or xbox 360)It sold badly.Why you ask because if what you are saying is true,those game designers who aren't good in making great concepts but rather make the graphics great were responsible for this or maybe due to the fact that sega didn't want it to release it before Christmas.
Now why can't anyone read my second story and say something about it?Cuz
my friend cody and the other members of yahoo answers dound it interesting.If you are attempting me to be a programmer,I can assure you that my creativity will be horrible than you expected.And I am not lazy to learn programming and I don't have any brain diseases either.I'll give you a good example.Go to google and read about Steve Purcell and Ron Gilbert(The creator of Monkey island)

I'll read it when you learn to write a little better! There are so many grammatical mistakes and such a lack of structure that it's unbearable to read such a long wall of text. You need to improve on that too if you want to present your ideas. By the way, it seems you've completely missed Big Boss's and maian's points, so I suggest you read their posts again.

This thread has spurred up some really interesting discussion, so thanks, contributors.

Oh, and one more thing. I skimmed through your story a bit, and some of the character names are ridiculous. Max Fuejack? Yeaso? Gotchya? Kazak? Darkvolt? Dincky? Kharn? Wow... :o

Hey coromoro I agree with you.Its just i was rushing and didn't notice any mistakes.Here is the Improved concept of D.N
D.N
Gameplay:It is a beat’em up game. Players goal is to defeat enemies and a boss at the end of every stage. Players choose three of these characters Max feujack Yeaso Gotchya and Kalie Rio, each with different abilities and different stories. But adds an interesting move.

Instead of recovering health if the player’s health
Reaches zero,the player can recover by pressing buttons that appear on the screen rapidly.
If the player fails to fill atleast one full energy bar,the game ends,also if the player keeps fainting,the buttons will appear fast.

There are three types of moves,solo,kazak and bang which the player can choose anytime.Solo moves are those which have simple moves like punches and kicks.Kazak mover are a little stronger moves with energy powers.Bang moves are more powerful moves and are done in a single blow.Performing Kazak and Bang moves will require certain amount of Red Dragons from the dragon bar but performing Bang moves not only reduce the Dragon bar but also the health bar as well.

These three types are further divided into combo moves.These moves allow the player to learn new moves from Solo,Kazak and Bang moves.To perform these combos the player needs to increase the combo bar to maximum by fighting baddies in order to perform combo 1 and so on.But If the enemies hit the player the combo bar will begin to reduce.
New Combo moves can be learned after completing a stage.

Story:Each character has a different story and a different plot.
Yeaso Gotchya:One day a kung fu master Kharn challenges his brother Kamil a new way of kung fu fighting.But to do this he must get himself a student.Kharn found a guy named Yeaso beaten by a bully.

Yeaso then agrees to learn martial arts with Kharn.Later Kamil decides to challenge Kharn’s student to a duel.Despite Yeaso’s victory,Kamil refuses to accept his defeat and he explains Yeaso about an evil lord shadow named Dincky.

Once there was a world called the Hell of Shadows.It was said that an emperor Fuize-Tung got lost there and five shadows,Darkvolt,Haze,Ibra,Blizzard and Dincky surrounded him.Fuize warned them to leave him alone but they all refused and they started attacking him.Fuize realeased a huge light which the shadows cannot resist.This destroyed the whole of the Hell of shadows land and all shadows were killed.Fuize was just about to leave but Dincky somehow survived from the explosion and fused with Fuize to create a powerful being.Only Dincky can control the new form.Seeing his hometown destroyed and his friends killed,Dincky takes his spell book and heads to the Fuiji sprit temple inorder ot revive his friends.But when he got there a priest send him to a portal and flungs him to another dimension.The portal sends Dincky to earth which makes his goal more difficult.But having heard of the legend of the Morgan Circle he decided to forget reviving his friends and find the circle to gain the power of eternity and dominate the whole universe instead.Hence he has wrecked havoc everywhere and killed millions of innorcent lives.After Kamil finishes the story,Kharn requests Yeaso to go buy a computer.

Yeaso was just about to use his move Nintusu until Kharn tells him to practice navigation for the time trial lesson.Yeaso agrees and goes by walking.Yeaso buys a computer from a stranger who calls himself the Disco Pop.Yeaso discovers some evil shadows attacking Kalie Rio Hoaska a blind man.Yeaso saves Kalie and offers to help the blind man by teaching him martial arts.But when they come back they find out that
Kharn is gone and Kamil is badly injured.Kamil tells Yeaso that Dincky has kidnapped Kharn and requests him to save Kharn. Agreeing Kamil’s request,Kamil gives Yeaso a power that is not known yet and he tells him to use it wisely but this causes Kamil’s death.

Yeaso’s computer shows Dincky’s location and the two agree to rescue Kharn .But Kalie fell on something.The two open the bag and find the Morgan circle.When Yeaso steps on the circle a dragon comes out.The dragon does not find the old man and realises that Yeaso and Kalei must be his students.Knowing that the old man is in trouble the dragon offered them powers.But before he gave the powers he warned them that they cannot perform moves from other kung fu masters but only with the powers from the circle.Yeaso refused because he trusted Kamil’s new power.Seeing Kalei blind the dragon gave Kalei the wind power.This helped Kalei sense things which can guide him.

The dragon wishes them good luck and dissappears.They first head to the train station which leads them to the forest where Dincky is.But as the train goes a fog begins to come and suddenly shadows cause trouble in the train.After Yeaso and Kalie stop them,the train crashes and they end up in a forest which is not the one where Dincky is.The two decided to split up but the fog causes them to go to the wrong directions.They finally made it to Dincky’s forest but they need the password to enter Dincky’s hideout.After they find the password,they get lost in the cave and are attacked by a giant worm.After that,they finally found Kharn.Yeaso tries to free Kharn but Kalie senses something odd after which Dincky arrives and attacks them.Yeaso realises that whatever attack he performs does not affect Dincky at all.Yeaso was then reminded about the power Kamil gave him and he uses it.

Suddenly Yeaso’s attacks begin to work and now understands how Dincky is strong.For the host Dincky fuses,he is invisible because his whole body becomes a shadow and the only way to fight him is to become a shadow.With Dincky defeated Dincky can only kill them if he knew the spell to turn into a more powerful being which he forgot.Yeaso got his spell book from the giant worm and he destroys it.Dincky gets angry and tries to release a huge power but Yeaso stops him with a single blow killing Dincky.The cave begins to collapse and the three escape.Kharn congratuates Yeaso for his courage.Kalie thanked Yeaso and decides to go and find his destiny leaving Yeaso and Kharn.The game ends when Yeaso goes out with a girl for a date.

Kalei Rio Hosaka: In a far away pa***a lives a peaceful unit.When suddenly a huge army of bandits known as the Black arrows started killing people and destroying towns.Tre-zi-lu the head of the Black arrows heads to his brother Ke-lee-lu to take over his place.the two began to fight.Ke-lee was almost defeated until his son Kalei saves him and fights Tre-zi-lu.Tre-Zi-lu slices off Kalei’s eyes making Ke-Lee angry.Ke-Lee quickly puts Kalei into a coma and puts him on a horse leaving him riding somewhere far away.

The next day Kalei wakes up and ends up in a desert.The horse leaves him there.Kalei realises that his home is destroyed and he decides to get help from a kung fu master but suddenly the Black arrows found him and sends him to prison.Kalei escapes and rides another horse.Soon he makes it to japan and he is suddenly attacked by some bullies until Yeaso saves him.Yeaso decides to help Kalei by teaching him martial arts. But when they come back they find out that Kharn is gone and Kamil is badly injured.Kamil tells Yeaso that Dincky has kidnapped Kharn and requests him to save Kharn. Agreeing Kamil’s request,Kamil gives Yeaso a power that is not known yet and he tells him to use it wisely but this causes Kamil’s death.

Yeaso’s computer shows Dincky’s location and the two agree to rescue Kharn .But Kalie fell on something.The two open the bag and find the Morgan circle.When Yeaso steps on the circle a dragon comes out.The dragon does not find the old man and realises that Yeaso and Kalei must be his students.Knowing that the old man is in trouble the dragon offered them powers.But before he gave the powers he warned them that they cannot perform moves from other kung fu masters but only with the powers from the circle.Yeaso refused because he trusted Kamil’s new power.Seeing Kalei blind the dragon gave Kalei the wind power.This helped Kalei sense things which can guide him.

The dragon wishes them good luck and dissappears.They first head to the train station which leads them to the forest where Dincky is.But as the train goes a fog begins to come and suddenly shadows cause trouble in the train.After Yeaso and Kalie stop them,the train crashes and they end up in a forest which is not the one where Dincky is.The two decided to split up but the fog causes them to go to the wrong directions.They finally made it to Dincky’s forest but they need the password to enter Dincky’s hideout.After they find the password,they get lost in the cave and are attacked by a giant worm.After that,they finally found Kharn.Yeaso tries to free Kharn but Kalie senses something odd after which Dincky arrives and attacks them.Yeaso realises that whatever attack he performs does not affect Dincky at all.Yeaso was then reminded about the power Kamil gave him and he uses it.

Suddenly Yeaso’s attacks begin to work and now understands how Dincky is strong.For the host Dincky fuses,he is invisible because his whole body becomes a shadow and the only way to fight him is to become a shadow.With Dincky defeated Dincky can only kill them if he knew the spell to turn into a more powerful being which he forgot.Yeaso got his spell book from the giant worm and he destroys it.Dincky gets angry and tries to release a huge power but Yeaso stops him with a single blow killing Dincky.The cave begins to collapse and the three escape.Kharn congratuates Yeaso for his courage.Kalie thanked Yeaso and decides to go and find his destiny leaving Yeaso and Kharn


Kalei then finds his hometown being slaved and laboured.Here he must make it to the castle without the guards knowing his arrival.After Kalei enters the castle he makes it to Tre-Zi-lu and they begin to fight.This time Kalei defeats him but suddenly Kalei senses something strange in Tre-zi’s body.At this point it is shown that Dincky fused with him becoming more powerful than before.Kalei is almost defeated until Yeaso saves him and quickly takes kalei to a safe point.Yeaso uses a device called the Dragon holder which holds Kalei’s dragon power so that Kalei can learn the move Yeaso used in order to defeat Dincky since he is a shadow.They kill Dincky and Tre-Zi-Lu.Peace has returned and Kalei would become the new emperor.But realising Yeaso’s loniness he refused and joins with Yeaso.The game ends when Yeaso and Kalei make it to Japan and call themselves D.N the Dragon Ninjas.

Max FeuJack:After ruining Dr.Vanderick’s evil plan,peace returns in Gadcarnet city.After several years have passed,Max FeuJack and Alec Faretch receive a message from the commisioner Lt.Surge.According to this message,a crazy bushin ninja named Rex Taipo wrecks havoc all over Japan and is considered the most dangerous person ever.The only way to beat him is to learn martial arts.So Max goes to Japan while Alec stays in Gadcarnet city.

When Max gets there he suddenly meets Yeaso from nowhere.Yeaso knows what Max is upto and asks him if he wants to learn martial arts.But Max refused because of Yeaso’s pride.Determined to make Max on his side Yeaso steals Max’s wallet and runs quickly forcing Max to follow him.Yeaso builds pranks on people and tells them that Max did it making Max fight against them.

After Yeaso lost him he buys himself a beer until Max shoots his jar.Yeaso gives up and gives his wallet back but he warns Max that tech is a weakling.Kalei suddenly arrives and tells Max that they know he has to learn martial arts inorder to fight Rex.Kalei tells him that he and Yeaso can help him provided that he trusts in them.After seeing Kalei shoot a bird from 1,000 miles and Yeaso’s combat Max agrees and learns martial arts with them.Yeaso takes him to the Morgan circle.

The dragon comes out and grants Max any one power he wants.Max chooses fire.After several months pass Max must defeat Yeaso inorder to fight Rex.Max wins and thanks them for their help despite their attitudes.They get themselves a taxi to head to Tokyo but the driver takes him somewhere else putting them into a coma.They wake up and realise that the driver works with Rex and he places a bomb and leaves.They manage to escape and ride a bike to reach to some town in a desert.They realise some people work with Rex and they try to get them but Max and co manage to escape and reach Tokyo.

They then enter a resturant and regonises Rex’s henchmen.Yeaso and Kalei will fight the others while Max can go to the rooftop and fight Rex.Max tries to shoot him but the gun gets overheated and finally realises Yeaso’s line”Tech is a weakling” .But Max easily defeats him but Rex begins to suddenly change.It was Dincky who fused with Rex and attacks Max.Max almost gets killed until Kalei and Yeaso save him.Since Yeaso is the only one who can kill Dincky he begged Max to surrender his dragon power and put it to the dragon holder.But Max refused and after several attempts he gave up and sent his dragon powers to the Dragon holder allowing him to learn Yeaso’s move to kill Dincky.After several atemps Max almost kills Dincky but dincky manages to escape killing Rex instead.Peace returns and Max admits he was wrong and becomes friends with Yeaso and Kalei.The game ends when Yeaso makes Max a new member of the D.N and Max and Yeaso sing the song “Y shouldn’t we party?”.

Secret story:This story can only be unlocked after finishing all the three stories.Dincky is alive despite Kalei’s effort on killing him.Suddenly Dincky remembers a transform from his spell book.He eats a crow,sticks a black feather on his hair and mutters words.He then transforms into a giant bird and he calls himself Black Dincky.Black Dincky flies off seeking revenge to those ninjas.Meanwhile Yeaso and his girlfriend Jeniya are on a date while Max and Kalei just watch them get along.

Suddenly Shadows begin wrecking havoc every where.The ninjas are astonished to see Dincky back.Black Dincky introduces to them his new form and he kidnaps Jeniya.The ninjas chase after him.Soon they found him and begin to fight.Yeaso realises that he didn’t need to be a shadow to fight him.But Black Dincky explains him why.Dincky can only host to a person only if he/she is pure evil.And he tells him that the attacks he performed on previous host are not his attacks but rather the hosts instead.He just joins with them to show how evil they are and if they do not match his type he leaves the host letting the ninjas kill it.But now that he transformed,his shadow combines with the host allowing him to perform his attacks.

The ninjas realise how strong he is with his agility,speed and power,they decided to fight together.After they kill Dincky with a final blow,peace returns and the game ends when Janiya kisses Yeaso and Max goes back to Gadcarnet city promising them that he will come back when they need him.

Hey coromoro I agree with you.Its just i was rushing and didn't notice any mistakes.Here is the Improved concept of D.N
D.N
Gameplay:It is a beat

Okay big boss and maian I will give you the topics from arenaanimation website since I can't post ULR's here.

Game and Simulation Programming

Game Art & Design

Game Software Development

Computer Animation

Special Effects Animation

Game Design

Programming & Game Development

C++ Programming for Game Developers

Video Game Console Design

Robotics

Graphics Programming with DirectX 9

Lightmapping & Radiosity

3D Engine Architecture

Game Mathematics

Artificial Intelligence for Game Developers

Physics for Game Developers

Digital Entertainment and Game Design

Creative Writing and Storyboarding for Games

Game Interface Design

Graphics Programming with OpenGL

Terrain Rendering

Special Effects Programming

This allows me to pick which topics I need.Creative writing and storyboarding for games,game art and design,special effects animation,game design and video and console game design.All these don't need programming.So you made the mistake of finding the right path.Both of you.Okay big boss and maian let me give you a task and just try to do it.Big boss tell some of your friends or your boss that you lack in programming or creativity.Y'know what he will say?If you are not creative but you know programming,he will assign you as a programmer and if you are not a programmer,he will assign you as a game designer.Many of us ore confused of the word game designing and that is why many don't want to do it.If you still argue,you are on your own.But I must give you a warning,don't spoil Maian just because he asked you about being a game designer and one day when you are in pressure you will soon realise the point i'm trying to tell you.And Maian,if you want to believe him,do it.But just leave me about programming because I'm bad in Math.

OK, so... you study that, then what? Magically obtain a career in game design?

I read a good chunk of your "Gun Hunter" story. I had to stop because your grammar and structure is still lacking way too much, and because your story sounds like a slightly more mature version of a Bugs Bunny cartoon, and I don't mean it in a good way...

I have a feeling they're saying that if you can't pull of multi stuff, you're jumping into an industry everyone wants to be in. It's like picking a ***ly guitarist in a band, or the ***ly guitarist that can sing while playing. You may not need to, but it doesn't hurt.


Also, I'm getting giggles out of this

Ok Maian you have a point about my comas and periods.And thank you for saying a bad comment about my second story.Like I said, I was rushing and I didn't notice my mistakes.If you like you can give me a few suggestions of my Gun Hunter plot alone.I wanted it to be like a secret agent game where the player must do things quickly without being noticed.I have a friend named Cody who found the story interesting and he liked it.I asked him if he found it embrassing and you know what he said? No.He just suggested me to leave gaps which I did.And what about you...you just give me a passage and criticize it without reading the whole story.Do you have any idea how long it took me to think of a story like that? Of course not.I know how to speak english and the point that I'm trying to say to you is that you don't have to do programming but rather improve your creative skills.Got it? Good.
@Coromoro I have improved my grammar and if you still find something wrong with it,let me know.And PHULEASE! does it sound like a bugs bunny cartoon to you? I just made a little humour that's all.Nothing else is funny other than the ones I wrote seriously.

Can anyone tell me what is wrong with my communication?

Okay I think I had enough of this unnecessary chat about programming.Let's all just forget about it and Omni thanx for saying that.Now for those who want to write their video game stories,please post it here so that we all can understand ourselves.Now will anyone just tell me how my story Gun Hunter and D.N are because I put a lot of effort.And please let me know if I had made grammar mistakes because like I said I wrote it fast due to excitement.

[QUOTE=coromoro;954193][b]Yeah, you made a few changes, but it's still terribly written! I already let you know in my last post.

I'll use this tiny excerpt as an example.



I'm no writer, but I'll tell you from a reader's perspective why this is badly written.

[color=white]"Two agents namely Max and Alec chase Vanderick by riding a car."

OK, two agents. Who are these agents? What is their mission? What are they doing and why? Who the heck is Vanderick? If you intend to leave these details out of the story for now for a particular reason, then at least you could provide some description of the characters, of the setting, etc. Where are they? I don't even know. Is Vanderick in a car as well? You're leaving us to assume way too much.

[color=white]

programming ****ing owns and you should learn how to do it

your webcomic is really bad

Hmph. Better than yours.

Anyone likes my stories?

Everyone like your stories.

Really? How come? Did you like my Gun Hunter story?

*facepencil*

Um..What do you mean by that?

In your post, you used the wrong form of the verb "like." In my post, I also used the wrong form of the verb "like." It was a subtle jab.

You should probably keep your stories under wraps until you actually make your games, though. Context is everything, and any outright silly impossibilities and contrivances can be forgiven if they're wrapped around a kick-ass game.

Finish school and in the process gather together a mighty band of like-minded individuals who don't mind living in a crappy apartment feasting on ramen noodles for a few years, and you might pull together a studio worthy of making iPhone or Flash games or something. Keep in mind that this is incredibly difficult to do and banks on a collective force of anti-social tendencies powerful enough to level a small town.

Otherwise, yeah. Start at the bottom of a real company and work your way up.

U mean my stories are...lame? I mean I put a lot of effort in those stories.But you're right,I think I outta finish my school and then join a company.But honestly you really found it lame? Can you at least tell me how was the D.N concept?
If it is the game play, I can change that cuz I knew it wouldn't sound good.I just
though that if members can write interesting stories here, I can find the friend I'm looking for. Not only that but also because I already had these concepts in mind and just to make sure I don't get fired just because of some mistake, I am posting my stories here so that if I get a good comment, I can be sure that it will sell well.I know its never gonna come true, but someday I wish to be one of the greatest game designers like the ones we admire a lot.But *sigh* you guys are right.I'm a loser.

If you cared that much about becoming a developer you would download Adobe Flash, learn Actionscript, build media for the game on Photoshop and Fruity Loops, code it all together in a couple of months and publish it on Newgrounds. It's certainly possible and if you're still in school you can buy these programs for dirt cheap. If you're really adventurous, try learning Papervision3D and get some experience with 3D Flash modelling- that is the future of interactive web content and will certainly add appeal to your game.

As for your writing... quite a few famous independent game designers have the spelling capacity of a 4'th grader, so I think you'll do just fine. The challenge is finding the willpower to take a good idea and put it into action regardless of what other people think. If you decide to take that step it will be a more valuable and rewarding experience than anything you'll be forced to deal with in high school. In the end, it has to be your decision to make.

Don't be so hard on yourself, Jack. Like I said: You're on VGChat. A more wretched hive of scum and villainy you won't find this side of the 1up.com boards.

Truth be told, I didn't read a word of your stories, so I'm certainly not saying they're lame. I'm just saying do something with them instead of just posting them around the net. That's why I've got my comic that I wrote that I'm gradually going to build into something considerably more awesome than it is at the moment, I hope.

O.K., not to be too horribly mean but, COME ON! I'm a freshman in highschool and I have better grammer skills than you!

Otherwise, like someone before me said, it would be better to get at least some programing in.

I am, at the moment, creating a RPG but I don't want to become a videogame designer, though I am keeping that option open. Who knows? I may not be the actor I want to be, I think you should keep that in mind as well.

For the games... I would do some name changing, honestly. Be more original, please.

[quote=Luvis7714;955212]I'm a freshman in highschool and I have better grammer skills than you!aaaaaahahahahahahaha please tell me this is an ironic post

grammor and speeling is two sperate thing.

How is it ironic?

I had a video ga,e idea once ok hear me out:

it was bout these toys that got out and escaped. but they'd have to fight enemy toy on the way but eventually a boss (usually contruction laborer) woiuld have to become defeated in order to proceed. the final boss being the day you're put into eternal slumber (time capsule). a story in whicch defeat may not offer just an end, but a future

I think I saw that movie.