Vampiro
Posted by The JudgeCheck your d[COLOR="black"]a[/COLOR]mned PM box.
Posted by Vampiro V. Empireok
http://www.vgchat.com/showpost.php?p=796581&postcount=6721
Posted by Antthat ends that chapter.
Posted by Vampiro V. Empireoh yeah, send it to [email]mercadian@gmail.com[/email]
Posted by The JudgeAlright. Before I send it to this email though, you have to promise me that it's yours. For all I know you're having me send it to some stranger who'd steal it, and that would make me probably go insane.
Posted by Antitt we speculate what they're talking about.
I say a nude pic of derick in a gasmask. oh and some gay hat.
Posted by Vampiro V. Empire
Quoted post: Alright. Before I send it to this email though, you have to promise me that it's yours. For all I know you're having me send it to some stranger who'd steal it, and that would make me probably go insane.
Why would I do that? I only use my hotmail account for **** I don't care to get right away since I only check it once a week. My gmail account is my homepage, so I always see that.
Posted by The JudgeThere, sent.
Also, I can get you AVPR posters. :)
Posted by Vampiro V. Empireooooooooh ***. best christmas present ever? yes
But yeah, I'll print this out and read it while I'm on the pooper or something. Give it my full concentration.
Posted by Antoh, that.
Posted by Vampiro V. Empireyeah, I'm pretty partial to erotica
Posted by The Judge
Quoting Vampiro V. Empire: ooooooooh ***. best christmas present ever? yes
But yeah, I'll print this out and read it while I'm on the pooper or something. Give it my full concentration.
I'll try to get it ASAP and then ask for your mailing address once more.
And thank you for giving it a read. Feedback is always appreciated.
Posted by Vampiro V. EmpireSo what are you exactly looking for? Just someone to read it and give a general opinion, or someone to critique it page for page?
Posted by The JudgeThe former, really. Just to see if you think it's marketable, well written, what you personally think if you were reading it as though it was a published story, and so on.
Just a basic critique.
Posted by Vampiro V. EmpireOh. I was ready to wreck some **** right there.
Posted by The JudgeYou can if you'd like, but know I don't take non-constructive criticism well.
Posted by BLUNTMASTER XI can't wait to read this erotica novel!
Posted by Vampiro V. Empire
Quoted post: You can if you'd like, but know I don't take non-constructive criticism well.
Oh, well it'd be constructive obviously. I'm not going to say "well, it was good up until page eight, then everything after was utter ****. You should probably kill yourself for writing such garbage." Nah, I'd give you pointers on how you could improve it obviously. But, I can do the general opinion thing too.
Posted by The JudgeK, that would be much appreciated. Thank you.
Posted by Ant"oh derick"
Posted by Vampiro V. EmpireOh, 18 chapters? I thought that was 18 pages. **** BETTER START READING I GUESS