well, its in my sig. comments? How to improve?
text is horrible. Papyrus makes eyes melt, placement and blending aren't too hot - Also the dude isn't very well-blended. Looks like you've just erased around him with a soft brush and stuck him on a generic 3d abstract bg.
I liked your old one more :/
Um more definition? I dunno, I have no clue whats going on in the pic