I wrote this the other day and, I wanted to hear your opinions. It's not exactly the best, but it was my first try. So, please go easy.
I wear this broken smile
In order to hide what I feel
The light of happiness
Never reaches the depths of my eyes
Forever filling them with darkness
You left me alone to live with this pain
So now I lay here
Crying out to your blessed face
And hoping you
It beats Sean Fury's poetry any day, except in how much I laugh while reading it. No further comment will be made by me at this time.
Hmmm...so many people it can apply to.
:(
It was great thou.
You sure are sad a lot. =/
Nice poem though. =]]
Zeta
Like Kefka
A **** good son
of a submariner
I am his Samus
and he,
my Belmont
We embrace
for an age
before the next page
of a DA thread
about our going to bed
- By Sanaxis?
:love:
That poem was pretty good, though.
Even though it was sad, it was pretty good. Do you do this often?
Pretty good poem. As stated earlier it could apply to a lot of people. I like it.