Taking Life At My Pace




Posted by Sean Fury

This is supposed to be a happy song, FYI, some of the lyrics seem depressing, but it's supposed to be sung in a happy tone. Would probably sound better through a Jrocker or something. Uh, either way, I'm posting it here for opinions because Fictionpress has been a whore recently with uploads and yeah, I need critism because I haven't written in ages.

Oh yeah, guess the influence of the song (both title and lyrics) and you win all my internets.

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All this energy I exert with each breath seems to just go to waste
It seems I just keep running in circles no matter which way I turn
It seems that I




Posted by Omni

Were you influenced by Panic! At The Disco? It's the same quality as their songs, and it doesn't seem to have any rhyming in it.




Posted by Sean Fury


Quoting Pretty Hate Machine: Were you influenced by Panic! At The Disco? It's the same quality as their songs, and it doesn't seem to have any rhyming in it.


That was an insult wasn't it? >_>

And no, not P!AtD.



Posted by Omni

It just might have been. Other than that, I have no ideas about who it might have been since it's not amazingly distinctive, but keep working at it, pal.