Sorry it took me sooooo long. I hope you like it and sorry for the lame parts.
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Dark Secret
Omg! That was great! I seriously need to work on my writing if I even want to come close to the greatness of your chapter!
Wow, I wasn't expecting that kind of reaction. ^_^
You overshadowed my chapter.
:(
Twas great, none the less.
Well I started Day 8. :p:
Yay! (My sig and avatar should show how happy I am.)
Wow! I loved it! I really liked the ending of the chapter!
That was really good!
There is only one part I didn't understand and it would help if you explained it to me....
[quote]“I think he is one or the other. I know that he isn’t some fake imitation of Riku.” said Kairi. “How?” Anara asked. “Something like this has happened before and even then, who was and who wasn’t the real Riku. And the person we saw was the real Riku.” explained Kairi. “Ok, so the only way we can find out is by finding out from Riku or from the person who changed Riku.” said Kousuke.
I really didn't understand that whole part. Think you can explain it to me?
Ok let me try to explain. That part where Kairi knew that Riku was the real Riku and not some heartbrid that looked like him was because of the stuff that happened in Kingdom Hearts, when Ansem possessed Riku or something. If that still doesn't make sense then it was because, when I wrote it I was sleepy.
(Sorry if I spell words wrong.)
Awesomeness!
Oh, and Arc, you have no right to complain. I posted my chapter nearly a week ago and no one has read it.
May as well install a new chapter in the Blank Book while I'm at it though.
Oh ok I get it.
Thanks for explaining Roxas!
Just a question. I don't understand, what makes my chapter so good? I mean I like that you guys like it but I got to know, what maked you guys love it?
Ok, I'll just go with that.
It just flowed really good together which made it enjoyable to read!
Too much praise for anyone.
But Roxie is an exception.