Somewhere else:A place I know well.




Posted by keyartist

"Oh man, what was that about?" Hated thought.

As he stands to his feet he sees a small group of people coming his way.

"Who are you"said hated.

Girl?:Hey look at that.
Guy1?:Look at what?
Girl?That guy over there.
Guy2?:Yeah I see him.
Guy1?:What is he doing here?
Girl?:Is that Aphasia?
Guy1?:No Aurie, its not.
Aurie:who are you?
Hated:Me, my name is hated.
Guy2:What?Hey Vecks ,what that guy say?
Vecks:I can't understand him.
Hated:I said my name is Hated.
Aurie:He sounds mad.Eiyuu what do you think?
Eiyuu:I have no clue.Lets just leave him.
Hated: No, I need your help.
Vecks:yeah? Lets go back to the ship. There's nothing here for us.
Aurie:yeah lets go.
Eiyuu:See ya.

As the three people walk away Hated feels a strange feeling inside him,and starts to get angry.

Hated: NO! PLEASE DON'T GO!

The three pay no mide to him and soon fade out of site.Hated alone again looks around and realizes that this place is from the dream he had. He the turns around as if he knows the way and starts running to the hills that can be seen in the distance.

An hour passes and Hated hears something behind him.He turns around to see a girl. She walks at him and says

Girl2?:I've been looking for you. I thought that you might be dead to.
Hated:I'm sorry,but do I know you?
Girl2?: What of course you know me.
Hated: You understand me?
Girl2?: yeah, are you ok?
Hated: I sorry but I don't think I know you.
Girl2?: What its me Alice, we've been friends forever.
Hated: You mean you know me, I..I.. How?
Alice:Yes, your name is ****.
Hated: What did you say, my name is Hated.
Alice: NO, it's ****. YOu really don't know, do you?
Hated: NO, I don't.
Alice:I'll show you.
Hated: OK.

Alice leads Hated to a burnt out village in the hills.
Alice:Any thing?
Hated looks around, A memory flashes in his mind of the village that once stood here, yet Hated replies

Hated: No nothing yet.
Alice: I know, follow me.

Alice starts to run into a house that looks like it is half standing.In the house there is a room to the left side of the door the came in. Hated walks in.
Memories start to flash in his head.House...room...mom..dad..Alice...Hated grabs his head, and falls to the ground.

Hated:Ahh What is this
Alice: **** are you ok?
Hated: Yeah, give me time to think.
Alice: Ok I'll meet you outside.

Alice leaves. Hated goes to a chair in the corner and sits down.
He starts to think then it all comes to him.

****:I remember, my real name, this house, my mom and dad, and Alice.

Just then a loud noise comes from out side and Alice's voice is heard.

Alice: AAAHHHHHHHHH! Help!Come quick.AAhhhh
****: ALICE

Out side you see Alice on the ground.Next to here a familar figure stands.

****: Hey, I know you.
Dark?:.........
****: You won't get away this time.

Again as our hero is running at him a weapon , appears again in his hands.**** slashes at the beast, and he fights back. Jumping into the air **** yells out a name.

****:Fragment Binding!

With that the beast is knock down but gets up quickly and unleashes a flurry of dark fire balls which knocks **** to the ground as he is hit he drops
his weapon.

****:UURGHHT.Oh you'll pay for that
Dark?: Ha ha ha , take this

He hears the beasts voice and it comes to familar to him.He has heard it before.He then remembers it's the voice he heard before he woke up on the battle field.

Dark?: Take this.
****:I'm ready for it.
Dark?: Ha ha ha Fine then die.

The beast summons a great fire ball and throws it at ****.He tries to move but he can't. For some reason his feet get stuck in a goo that is on the ground.

****:Oh great, glue.Ahhhhh
DArk?:Ha ha ha our dream will finally come. You will be the one taken by the darkness and rid the world of light.

The ball of dark fire speeds at our hero but right before it hit some sort of magic shield appears in front of him and absorbs the darkness and throws it back at the beast.

****:Alice your ok.
Alice:Yes I'm stronger than you think, now jump ing the fire ball.

Without any stall he jumps in to the fire ball that is heading back at the beast. The beast stands still knowing he will only get stronger if it hits him.**** rushes out of the fire ball and goes right between the beast legs. see his weapon on the ground he swoops it up and slashes at the beasts back before the fire ball could hit it.

Dark:AAAhhhhhhhhhhhh No this is not over..
****:No I has just Started.

Within an instance the beast hit with the fire ball and fades back into where ever had came from, but not before giving **** a few words.


Dark: You will soon fall to the darkness, and thats when i'll take my revenge Hated.

Here the name Hated makes **** smile.He looks at the beast and right when he fades away he says.

****: Oh yeah , by the way my name is Dextah not Hated.

Dextah knowing his true name runs to Alice a picks her up.

Alice: So I guess you know your real name now.
Dextah: Yeah, He called me Heted I don't know why, but I think its not the last time we're going to here it
Alice: Why would you say that?
Dextah: Because our story has finally started
Alice:Our story?
Dextah: Yeah, your coming with me right?


Alice looks up at Dextah and with a big smile says

Alice: Of course I am.

And with that chapter two comes to an end. What will happen next?




Posted by Sak

YOU HAD NO RIGHT TO USE OUR CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY! NO RIGHT WHATSOEVER!




Posted by Roxas Lover

Keyartist,I liked that part of the story too.
But don't think you should use Kairi Fan's characters unless she says you can.




Posted by Xenos

Wait, what the hell is this?




Posted by Wally The Weird

Yeah, this annoys me to no end.
I despise people using my characters, which is why I am not too fond of fan fiction overall. Ours is different however, in that we use concepts and ideas and we have it take place in a universe, and may even make referance to actual characters, but we never use them.
Ours, and ours alone.




Posted by Riku Dark Badass

haha wow buddy really BAD move **** BAD!!!!




Posted by Arcadios

why does every hate him?