jefferey shalome
1st June 2006, 05:13 PM
Ok, if someone on here can do the drawings, then this might be a decent graphic novel idea.
Here is the first part of my script for the first few issues
The Draconian Vanguard.
Opening: We see a man with a scruffy beard, holding a sword to a half-dragon’s neck; the man has his foot on its head. He is wearing a Grey suit, similar to the G-man. The Half Dragon is wearing a red shirt and a chain mail vest, plate mail leggings. He has yellow scales and a tail with a point on it. A girl wearing a white tank top and a black skirt looks on. She is accompanied by a boy, wearing a black wide brimmed hat, a black trench coat, black shirt, and tattered blue jeans. They are in an abandoned warehouse, a computer console in the background has a timer on it reading 5 minutes.
Man: Go near it and he dies.
Half Dragon: Do it Jolene!
Boy: Dam it Lebar, let him go!
Jolene looks around, she doesn’t know what to do, she looks at Ulric, the boy, she looks at him. Then she looks at Draco, who winks at her. His tail raises slowly, and then, suddenly, it pierces Lebar’s neck. Lebar’s weight shifts down onto his sword, and Draco’s neck is sliced open.
We pull away, Jolene and Ulric rush toward the body, and kneel over it. A text panel appears on top of the panel.
Draco (thinking) You’re probably wondering how all of this happened.
The panel turns black
Draco(thinking) well, I’ll tell ya.
We see an egg on a pedestal, knight are kneeling around it
Draco: It was after the crusades, the knihts brought an egg back from the far east. It was my grandfather.
The egg hatches, a small half dragon pops out, and looks around.
Draco: Thus, the Draconian vanguard is born. They were a group of mages that were instructed to protect my ancestors, and of course, me.
The egg hatches, a small half dragon pops out, and looks around.
Draco: Fast forward a few dozen years, and my egg comes along. I don’t hatch for a few thousand years, until about 2015. `
An apartment in the city, an egg on a table. A mother is holding a child, and a father is preparing for the new arrival. The egg hatches, out plops a yellow scaled half dragon.
Draco: Now, about 3 years later, a mad man comes along wanting to kill off all of the heroes. He does.
A panel of a man standing at a stone table, with a knife driven through it.
Draco: That was Krull. He was basically taking out all of the major countries in the world. His next stop was America.
We are now in a small, dimly lit room, Draco and a hooded figure are sitting at a table.
Draco: Mind if I get something to drink? I’m really thirsty, can’t tell a story without some water.
We are now looking at the grim reaper, who is sitting opposite of Draco
Grim: Sure, the fridge is in the next room on the right.
Ok, needs some work. What do ya think? Next part coming soon!
Here is the first part of my script for the first few issues
The Draconian Vanguard.
Opening: We see a man with a scruffy beard, holding a sword to a half-dragon’s neck; the man has his foot on its head. He is wearing a Grey suit, similar to the G-man. The Half Dragon is wearing a red shirt and a chain mail vest, plate mail leggings. He has yellow scales and a tail with a point on it. A girl wearing a white tank top and a black skirt looks on. She is accompanied by a boy, wearing a black wide brimmed hat, a black trench coat, black shirt, and tattered blue jeans. They are in an abandoned warehouse, a computer console in the background has a timer on it reading 5 minutes.
Man: Go near it and he dies.
Half Dragon: Do it Jolene!
Boy: Dam it Lebar, let him go!
Jolene looks around, she doesn’t know what to do, she looks at Ulric, the boy, she looks at him. Then she looks at Draco, who winks at her. His tail raises slowly, and then, suddenly, it pierces Lebar’s neck. Lebar’s weight shifts down onto his sword, and Draco’s neck is sliced open.
We pull away, Jolene and Ulric rush toward the body, and kneel over it. A text panel appears on top of the panel.
Draco (thinking) You’re probably wondering how all of this happened.
The panel turns black
Draco(thinking) well, I’ll tell ya.
We see an egg on a pedestal, knight are kneeling around it
Draco: It was after the crusades, the knihts brought an egg back from the far east. It was my grandfather.
The egg hatches, a small half dragon pops out, and looks around.
Draco: Thus, the Draconian vanguard is born. They were a group of mages that were instructed to protect my ancestors, and of course, me.
The egg hatches, a small half dragon pops out, and looks around.
Draco: Fast forward a few dozen years, and my egg comes along. I don’t hatch for a few thousand years, until about 2015. `
An apartment in the city, an egg on a table. A mother is holding a child, and a father is preparing for the new arrival. The egg hatches, out plops a yellow scaled half dragon.
Draco: Now, about 3 years later, a mad man comes along wanting to kill off all of the heroes. He does.
A panel of a man standing at a stone table, with a knife driven through it.
Draco: That was Krull. He was basically taking out all of the major countries in the world. His next stop was America.
We are now in a small, dimly lit room, Draco and a hooded figure are sitting at a table.
Draco: Mind if I get something to drink? I’m really thirsty, can’t tell a story without some water.
We are now looking at the grim reaper, who is sitting opposite of Draco
Grim: Sure, the fridge is in the next room on the right.
Ok, needs some work. What do ya think? Next part coming soon!